Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, December 6, 2019
lorde bio
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Kia ora Leo, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have included some awesome facts in your bio about Lorde! I think it is so awesome how she has been singing since she was 10 and started writing her own songs in her early teens. It must have been really hard work for Lorde to get where she is today, but she has inspired so many people and now has an amazing career!
12 million dollars is alot of money to have! If you had 12 million dollars, what would you do with it?
Quick Tip- Perhaps if you had a new sentence for each fact about Lorde it would make the bio look a little bit neater.
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