Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, June 14, 2018
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
You are good at making minecraft skins.
Did you know I love minecraft because you can play with your friends?
Next time, you could bring the eyes closer to the nose.
Why did you make his pants so big?
This is amazing because it it beautiful.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like the long pants?
Next time, you could make a background.
What is his name?
his name is jeffery thanks for commenting though
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