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Thursday, June 21, 2018

DADWAVERS

      DADWAVERS-Story

I fall in deep cold water and see something brown so I went and investigated. I flap my feet as I swim closer to the blurry brown thing. I swim closer then I see a statue   “how did this get here this is crazy”? Why would a statue be at the bottom of the sea in Brazil . Then I saw a fish with sharp teeth and fins till I realised what It was  I swam quickly away. As I swim away I see the boat when I got up the sun was sliding away. I thought why would a statue be at the bottom of the ocean? I felt as cold as ice when 
we drove back to land. 

I could feel the boat jump when it hit the waves
 when we got there the driver drove in the boat and then the driver anchored it on shore. I jumped out and went back to my room ready for another day I had some chips and went to sleep. I woke up in the morning feeling fresh and ready for another day I went to  the shore two go for another scuba dive I did this so I could see that statue again without bumping into the shark that looked like it was guarding the statue.aq


I jumped into the water and swim to the statue which was just sticking out of the water. As soon as I saw the statue I looked around for the shark It was not there so I swam closer and looked around the statue. I found a price tag and some sculpture company on it. Then I realise that it's no treasure it just fallen of a ship and ended up down here at the bottom of the sea. So I swim back up and get on the ship going back to the resort feeling disappointed and annoyed.             

2 comments:

  1. This is amazing because you put in detail.
    Did you know I like freezing coldwater?
    Next time, you could make your paragraphs longer.
    Why did you write about a boat.

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    1. I write about a guy going underwater not about a boat but thanks for the feedback

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