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Monday, March 2, 2020
This is just to say...
We are involved in the NZ get writing program and we have been writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem called this is just to say.
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Hi Leo, it's Leah here. Great poem. Did your parents find out about you eating the chocolate covered almonds? Maybe next time you could add a little bit more information about William Carlos Williams and the poem. Keep up the good work! See you later.
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