Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 19, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Leo! (I'm going to try and stay serious in this comment) I love the way your Dora meme fit so perfectly with the theme, it honestly surprised me, however I was a bit distracted by everything else going in the animation. Next time I recommend you focus more on the greetings side of stuff, and not so much about the memes.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise well done.
"memes"
Deleteill get ride of them thank you for the comment
DeleteHi Leo, I like how those memes come up at the perfect time. Next time you could make the characters a bit more detailed like adding facial expressions like sad, happy, angry, sleepy, or even hot.
ReplyDeletethank you for the comment ill work on that
DeleteHi Leo, its Matilda, I like the way your Dora picture was absolutely huge it honestly gave me shock, I was a bit unsure about everything happening in the animation. Next time try to not to focus so much on the memes and try and focus on what the people are saying.
ReplyDeletei got rid of half of them memes thanks for the comment
DeleteLeo you need to fix that big dora pls its to big.
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